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I saw a light up ahed I started to drag myself to it pulling behind me my heavy load. I was beginning to blackout as I approached the the light witch turned out to be a campfire. The tranquilizers were setting in as I pulled my self into the light. I heard a gasp as a women saw me. She exclaimed " look at the size of that dog!" Dog? I thought puzzled but before I could say enything I blacked out.
     I guess I so
Gould tell you how I got into the situation I'm in. It all started after I lost my job. I decided to in list in the marines. I made it through the training against all odds. I was at a military base for about two years. Witch one I'm not aloud to tell. Eny way I was there for two years when I was approached with a special offer to test out a new weapons for the military. They said it would keep me off the field and was higher pay so of course I agreed.
     When I arrived they took me in to a lab and showed me around to get me comfortable. Then they told me what I would be testing. I found out it wasn't the weapons I thought I was going to use. The were enhancers. A new way of using DNA to enhance your body creating a super soldier. I was Leary at first but they told me it was safe and who says no to the doc?
 So they set me up in the lab and hooked me up to a bunch of equipment. There was also a women there. I found out later she was part of a navy seals group. After it was all over. They sent use to our rooms to recover. Over a two month period they tested our strength, agility, and senses. They had improved dramatically.
 So every thing was going great until one day it was just me and the women who's name was Mickey by the way. We were working out when all of a sudden Mickey cried out and crumbled to the ground for no reason and started shaking violently. I called out for help. As I was waiting on some one to come a great pain took over my body. I collapsed to the floor. It felt like every bone in my body was breaking and my skin was on fire. I passed out from the pain as I heard feet running to our aid.
 When I next woke up I felt different but I could move because I was strapped down not even my head. I over heard the doctors and scientist talking to the general Stratton. He said " This project is a complete failure! It has cost us billions and two of my best. I thought you said it was safe?"
 First doctor" we thought it was. It must of reacted to there DNA differently then we expected.
 Seconded doc " we can't let them go if the world finds out what has happened here it could go very badly for the government and for us.
 Gen. Stratton" don't u think I know that! We are going to have to say they died in battle. Closed casket. We will just have to kill them. I hate to lose such good fighters but its what must be done.
  Well I had heard enough and I wasn't about to be killed. I pulled on the restraints. The broke easily with my new strength. One of the doctors saw me and tried and restrain me but I Easley flung him off. He hit the power grid and the lights shut off. When I thee the doc I got a glimpse of my arm I thought it looked fury but I thought it was my imagination. I called out for Mickey. She answered but sounded very weak I felt my way threw the dark past the staff that was there and found her. I picked her up and started for the door. I had memorized the whole layout of the place so I wouldn't get lost and it came in handy. I was able to feel my way out of the building. For being such a top secret base it wasn't guarded heavy I guess so it wouldn't draw so much attention. When I got out side it was also completely dark it was a new moon and it was an overcast sky. I made for the woods but not be for I heard the door open behind me. I heard Stratton  yell for me to stop but I kept going but then I felt something strike me in the back and then another. I started to sprint now. Thankful for my new strength or I would not have been able to carry Mickey. I went a long distance before I began to get dizzy. I put Mickey down and felt we're I got hit and pulled out two what felt like darts but it was to dark to see. I became worried and picked up Mickey agin but I felt something around her rear that felt like a tail but I thought mite just be her shirt or a something. I went on until my arms and legs became shaky and I grew so dizzy I feel to my knees. I saw a light up ahead and I tried to stand but I couldn't so I had to craw while dragging Mickey behind me.



Ok guys this is the first part in hopefully a long series. Please tell me what u think and also off I don't get enough people reading it I think I will stop because this is a lot of writing.
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LittleAMissEpic Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow....:clap::iconbravoplz:
amazing job Lone!
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Lonewolf23pro Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankz uz thankz uz very much :D
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LittleAMissEpic Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcomez your welcomz very much =P

keep it up, its going to be epic=D
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Lonewolf23pro Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I'll do the next part sooner
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LittleAMissEpic Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome, you got featured=D
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Lonewolf23pro Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
?
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LittleAMissEpic Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah dude, I totally told people to read it in my journal=D
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Lonewolf23pro Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u :D
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BeccaCollis Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A few spelling mistakes but a really great story!
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Lonewolf23pro Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya I was dead tired. I just got back from cross fit when I wrote it. So was not very concerned about spelling lol. Eny way thanks. :D :D
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